Week #4

So one day there was a kid named Bob. Bob was a very good explorer and his favorite place was a riverbed so one day he went there little did he know that the riverbed was dry. So he was walking down and he saw the river bed then he said, “I’ve never seen the river bed so dry.” It was so dry that there was not a single living thing in there. So Bob decided to go in there then he found a piece of obsidian so he went to show his dad. His dad said, “THATS AN ARROWHEAD!”

One thought on “Week #4

  1. Hello Brody,
    It seems Bob was an explorer who enjoyed the outdoors. What a wonderful discovery it would be to find the obsidian had been made into an arrowhead.
    One small hint, try not to start sentences with “so”
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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